Rewind....Redo

This is a very different angle than Mr.Clerge had used previously to present his work. The Spoken Word Piece is the same where he tries to demonstrate his interpretation of what some artists in hip hop have resorted to and personifies their philosophy.Which he succeeds in doing.Whether his point of view is right or not, well from a broad scope Mr.Clerge may have something but he is rather extreme.In saying that artists are consciously putting down the mantle and responsibility of educating our youth.I believe he may have to do more research and specify artists for him to be more accurate.The performance aspect of the piece has improved along with the ANGLE that the artist shot his piece. The idea of having two different personas having a conversation represented both sides of the pendulum which was interesting as well as creative.But the articulation of the artists was still mediocre and he may have been better served without the video editing tools used. His future may be bright if he persists to work on his trade and polish his abilities. The issue he presses upon is very real and imminent in our society.We are failing to realize the severity and rapidness of artists such as Mr.Clerge is impersonating are getting deals and assuming the name of hip hop openly and proudly.Clerge addresses an important issue and we should take note of that.